Thursday, 31 March 2011

Chapter 17: Interior monologue of Asher on the pitch

Yeah, I hit him. But why is he still standing? Didn't he notice it? “You're hit, Jonas!” Doesn't he believe me? He still doesn't lie on the ground. Well...I'm just going to shoot him down again. “Pow!You're hit again!” What is he doing there? He must have heard me and seen how I hit him. Why is he shaking now? Does he want to play his role more realistic? Maybe he should have been chosen as an actor and not as our new Receiver. That's enough. He doesn't act like a hit man. He is just standing there and doing nothing. He destroys the whole game. I should go to him and give him a tongue-lashing. “You ruined it”....

4 comments:

  1. Hey Franzi,
    this is a very good idea.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    Go on like this!

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  2. Short post, but i think it is a good one, because I think we all can understand what Asher is thinking.
    Nice work!

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  3. I like your new background!! Did you draw it yourself? I think it fits the book perfectly! Well chosen / drawn!

    I like the idea of writing an interior monologue of Asher, especially as he is a flat character we only get to know a few things about him. You've found quite a gap there and filled it fantastically!

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  4. No, I didn't draw this picture myself. :D
    I found it on this webpage: http://pearldragon145.deviantart.com/art/The-Giver-77316800
    and made it a little bit smaller so that you can see the whole apple.

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